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Jack is my good friend. I know him well. He has good habits at school. He listens to teachers carefully

in class. He puts his school things in order in his desk. He always finishes his homework on time. But he has

some bad habits at home. He likes watching TV and playing computer games. He spends much time on TV

and computer games so that he often goes to bed late. And he usually makes his room dirty and messy. To be

a better boy, Jack should try to form good habits at home too.

Jack is my good friend. I know him well. He has good habits at school. He listens to teachers carefully in class. He puts his school things in order in his desk. He always finishes his homework on time. But he has some bad habits at home. He likes watching TV and playing computer games. He spends much time on TV and computer games so that he often goes to bed late. And he usually makes his room dirty and messy. To be a better boy, Jack should try to form good habits at home too.

文章主题：

本题要求写朋友的习惯，属于记叙文。

文章时态：

描写习惯这种具有恒常性的事，可用一般现在时。

文章结构：可以先描写朋友的好习惯，再写坏习惯，最后总结写出一些自己的建议。

文章成文：

文章结构清晰后，需要注意正确表达要点，注意连接词的使用，适当使用一些亮点词汇短语和高分句型。

亮点词汇短语：

listen to teachers 听老师（讲课）

put sth in order 把……收拾好

like doing sth 喜欢做某事

watch TV 看电视

spend time on sth 花时间做某事

go to bed 上床睡觉

文章检查：

完成全文后，注意检查单词拼写和语法问题，保证逻辑清晰，语句准确流畅。