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John likes Science best at school. He thinks it's very useful to human beings and

the world. So he has a great dream. He wants to be an excellent scientist when he grows

up.

To make his dream come true, he should study harder and harder, and read more

books about science. After all, acquiring a lot of knowledge is very necessary. But at

the same time, he should keep healthy. He must have a healthy body, and then he can

work better for his dream.

It is said that "There is a will, there is a way!" I think he can make his dream come

true in the near future.

John likes Science best at school. He thinks it's very useful to human beings and the world. So he has a great dream. He wants to be an excellent scientist when he grows up.

To make his dream come true, he should study harder and harder, and read more books about science. After all, acquiring a lot of knowledge is very necessary. But at the same time, he should keep healthy. He must have a healthy body, and then he can work better for his dream.

It is said that"There is a will, there is a way!"I think he can make his dream come true in the near future.

文章主题：

本题要求写John为了成为一名科学家所做的努力，结合图片内容看图说话。

文章时态：

描写常规叙述性事件用一般现在时即可，以第三人称为主。

文章结构：

首先写John的兴趣爱好及梦想，再写他为了实现梦想做了哪些努力，最后总结加祝福。

文章重点：

重点内容为John的努力，以及由此可得出的启发，最后升华文章。

文章成文：

文章结构清晰后，需要注意正确表达要点，注意连接词的使用，适当使用一些亮点词汇短语和高分句型。

文章检查：

完成全文后，注意检查单词拼写和语法问题，保证逻辑清晰，语句准确流畅。