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      Helen is eleven years old. She feels cold. 
She has a headache too. She has a cold. She 
should take some medicine. She should drink 
some warm water and have a good rest. She 
shouldn't eat ice cream.
        Helen is eleven years old. She feels cold.She has a headache too. She has a cold. She should take some medicine. She should drink some warm water and have a good rest. She shouldn't eat ice cream.

文章主题:
本题要求根据海伦的病历卡描述病情并给出建议,属于应用文。
文章时态:
时态用一般现在时即可
文章结构:
首先结合病历卡写明海伦的病情,其次重点介绍海伦应该怎么做。
文章重点:
重点在于表达病症以及给出建议中所用到的一些短语和固定表达。
文章成文:
文章结构清晰后,需要注意正确表达要点,注意连接词的使用,适当使用一些亮点词汇短语和高分句型。
连接词:Besides;Also;What's more等。
文章检查:
完成全文后,注意检查单词拼写和语法问题,保证逻辑清晰,语句准确流畅。