The Great Wall lies in the northern part of China. It has a long history of over 2 000 years. It's more than 20 000 kilometres long. If you'd like to travel to the Great Wall, I think you can visit it in any season. When you climb the wall, remember to watch your steps and take some water with you. The Great Wall is world-famous because it's really amazing. I have been there once. I was really tired but I had a fantastic time that day!
*亮点词汇
northern 北方的
more than 超过
in any season 在任何季节
world-famous 举世闻名的
fantastic 非常棒的
*高分句型
If you'd like to travel to the Great Wall, I think you can visit it in any season.
如果你想去长城旅游,我想你可以在任何季节去。
When you climb the wall, remember to watch your steps and take some water with you.
当你爬长城时,记得注意脚下,并随身带些水。