My dream
I have a dream. I am going to be an astronaut when I grow up. I like the space very much. Then I will walk on the Mars and find new home for us. I am going to find the people on the Mars too. It's very hard to be an astronaut, so I will work hard to make my dream come true. I will study science very hard, and listen to the teacher carefully. I am going to buy some Science magazines to read. I think my dream will come true.
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短语/句式积累:
① be going to do 将做某事
② grow up 长大
③ walk on the Mars 在火星行走
④ It's +形容词+ to do sth. 做某事……
⑤ work hard 努力学习、努力工作
⑥ make one's dream come true 使……梦想成真
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按照题目要求,文章写了自己的理想以及如何实现自己的理想。文章中的 I will…以及I'm going to都是一般将来时的体现。本篇范文用到了一些主从复合句和一些固定搭配,使文章看起来比较地道。