Dear Chairperson,
My name is Linda and I would like to become(想成为) a member of the school Birdwatching Club. I am a 15-year-old girl from Class 1, Grade 9. I like playing(喜欢做某事) volleyball, keeping pets and learning English. I am free from 1:30 to(从……到……) 3:00 on Wednesday afternoons. I love nature very much. I have been interested in(对……感兴趣) birds since I was young. I have read many books on birds. I think it is very important to protect the rare birds which are in danger now. I want to learn more about(更多地了解) birds. I am willing to spend my free time doing(花时间做) things for birds. You can call me at(拨打……联系……) 87564538 or email me at linda@163.com.
范文中包含了自己的基本信息、自己的优势以及申请的理由。文章内容完整而充实,也用到了一些地道的表达法和句型。
范文中唯一不足的地方是用了太多I开头的句子,句式略显单调。如果句型能更多变,文章会更完美。