The Special Olympics World Games give children and adults with intellectual disabilities a chance to show their skills to the world.
I was lucky to（幸运做某事） volunteer for the Games in Shanghai in 2007. All the volunteers received training（接受训练） before doing the task. Then we provided support（提供支持） for the athletes. I was a swimming coach for a young boy from North China. He tried his best and finished fourth（获得第四名） in the competition. He felt more confident about himself. I think it was great to work with these athletes and help them achieve their dreams（实现他们的梦想）. It was an amazing experience of my life.
本文讲述了自己成为志愿者前接受训练、给运动员提供支持、运动员取得的成绩以及自己的感想。文章句意通顺，层次清晰、有逻辑。文章用了大量地道的短语和句型，为文章增色不少。
短语/句式积累：
① give sb. a chance to do sth. 给某人一个做某事的机会
② be lucky to do sth. 做某事很幸运
③ volunteer for … 为……做志愿者
④ provide support 提供支持
⑤ finish fourth 获得第四名
⑥ achieve one's dream 实现某人的梦想
