Dear all,
Thank you for what you have done for me. I can't get well without your help and support. Now I have been back to school and I will try my best to catch up with(尽我最大的努力追赶) my classmates. In order to(为了) help more sick children, I have made up my mind(下定决心) to be a doctor when I grow up. From now on, I will take an active part in(积极参加) some volunteering activities to help people in need. I hope we can work together(一起努力) to make our society better and better.
Best wishes
Xiao Wei
短语/句式积累:
① Thank sb. for sth. 因为某事感谢某人
② try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
③ catch up with 赶上
④ in order to 为了
⑤ make up one's mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事
⑥ take an active part in 积极参加
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