Thursday, 20 June
Today our class had a charity walk(举行了慈善行走). The purpose of this activity is to donate money(筹钱) to students in poor areas. During the event, participants covered行走(一段路程) the 10 km route in three hours, handing out(分发) leaflets to promote宣传 the charity. In the end, our school collected(募集) more than 10,000 yuan.
I think it's really a wonderful experience. I'm proud of(对……感到骄傲) myself for what I have done. I hope more and more people will join us and do something for those children.
本文要求写一篇关于学校举行的慈善行走的日记。文章按照写作要点分别写了活动的目的、过程、结果和感受。文章包含了所有的要点、内容完整、句意通顺,层次清晰、有逻辑。文章用了大量地道的短语和句型,为文章增色不少。
短语和句式积累:
① have a charity walk 举行慈善行走
② donate money 筹钱
③ hand out leaflets 分发传单
④ be proud of 对……感到骄傲