Dear all,
We will have a Charity Day next week. It's time to do something meaningful for people in need.
An 11-year-old boy called Tom is in need of our help. Tom was born with eye problems. And operation can bring hope to him. But his family is too poor to pay for the operation. The boy can't go to school now. But he wishes he could study at school like us!
I am writing to ask you to help him. What he needs most is money for the operation. We can donate some money to his family. Moreover, we can visit him and read interesting stories to him.
I hope all of us can give a helping hand and Tom will get well soon.
Thanks for your help.
Li Hua
句式/词组/短语积累:
① Charity Day 慈善日
② It's time to do sth. 做……时候到了
③ something meaningful 有意义的事
④ in need of 需要
⑤ be born with 生来
⑥ bring hope to sb. 给某人带来希望
⑦ donate money to sb. 给某人捐钱
⑧ give a helping hand 帮助
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