There are many advantages in study four. First, it provides the students with a chance to experience different cultures, and also opens the whole new world to them. Second, it not only improves their abilities to learn and live on their own, but also helps them communicate with others easily.
However, every coin has two sides. Study tour has some disadvantages as well. The cost of the study tour is so high that many families can't afford it. What's more, the students don't have many chances to learn and communicate. In fact, most students just visit some sights during the tour.
In my opinion, study tour is of great help to us. It can help us make new friends from different countries or places. Besides, it brings learning and playing together so that we can develop the interest in our learning.
*亮点词汇
advantage 优点
provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物
experience 体验
communicate with sb. 与某人交流
disadvantage 缺点
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Second, it not only improves their abilities to learn and live on their own, but also helps them communicate with others easily.
其次，这不仅提高了他们独立学习和生活的能力，而且还帮助他们更容易与他人交流。
The cost of the study tour is so high that many families can't afford it.
游学的费用太高，很多家庭负担不起。
Besides, it brings learning and playing together so that we can develop the interest in our learning.
此外，它把学习和玩耍结合在一起，这样我们就可以培养学习的兴趣。
