Last winter holiday(寒假), I went to Jilin with my parents to see Tianchi Lake. When we got to the top of(……的顶部)Changbai Mountain and saw Tianchi Lake, we couldn't stop crying(忍不住哭了). It was so amazing. We enjoyed ourselves(玩得开心) and took a lot of photos(拍了许多照片). In the evening, we spent our night in a famous hotel at the foot of(在……山脚下) the mountain and enjoyed the local food. It was a fantastic trip.
本文要求介绍自己的和父母的特殊旅行。文章按照写作要点分别写了旅行的地点、过程、结果以及感受。文章包含了所有的要点、内容完整、句意通顺,层次清晰、有逻辑。文章用了大量地道的短语和句型,为文章增色不少。
句型/短语积累:
① winter holiday 寒假
② go to a place with sb. 和某人去了某地
③ the top of ……的顶端
④ can't stop doing sth. 忍不住做某事
⑤ enjoy oneself 玩得开心
⑥ take photos 拍照
⑦ at the foot of 在……山脚下
⑧ local food 当地的食物